The River (Sonnet)
I hope sonnets come under the heading of this section. This is the first one I've written, and I realise it has echoes of romantic poets!As an exercise, I've loved it.The RiverThe river curves towards...
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If thats a first attempt - I'll just give up on sonnets now! Very impressive It does give a sense of calmness and serenity, despite its rather morbid content - well done "Write the bad things that are...
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Hi Davie... i enjoyed this very much. Your imagery is well-thought and takes the reader on a natural, albeit final, journey. Thanks for sharing.
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I agree ... despite the topic ... the imagery and flow give this a very peaceful feeling ... nicely done!I embrace my desire to feel the rhythm, to feel connected enough to step aside and weep like a...
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Not bad at all, Davie...not bad at all! I love sonnets...one of my favourite forms... Exit light...Enter night...Take my hand...We're off to never-never land...Welcome to...The Maelstrom...
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So gentle, so peaceful, so well written, but is this the right form for such a horrible subject? Just a thought. Thanks for sharing...Angel
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How quickly the tide can turn. This was great Davie. If this is a first attempt you must be a prodigy.Step into Suzie's Sanctuary
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Many thanks, everyone, for your kind and very helpful comments. I'm certainly not a "prodigy" - much too old for that! I've written poetry before, but never a sonnet.I don't think I agree with those...
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